GRR Reviews Changing Her Mind (The O'Malleys Book by Stevie MacFarlane

Changing Her Mind didn't come across to me as "romantic", though there's definitely some unrequited lust and stuff.

Rebecca lost her family early on and grew up with the O'Malleys. She wanted Mason O'Malley for a VERY long time, but he's always treated her as the surrogate little sister. But Becca is all grown up now, and she's determined to put her... womanly gifts to full use. But Mason will not accept one-night stands. he wanted forever, i.e. marriage and all that. And that, Becca is not ready for. But with a few spankings (Mason rather enjoys throwing Becca over his knees...) perhaps Mason can change Becca's mind...

Uh... I don't get this at all. The ending was a sudden shift to a sick/comfort scenario, and the whole idea of using erotic spanking as persuasion is just a bit morally ambiguous, but then he's already morally ambiguous. There's also a secondary plot between Mason's brother Nick, and a different girl, Maggie that didn't mix well with the primary plot. While I like the push-pull, the other elements left me with "WTF?!" feeling.

Category: Contemporary

Primary Plot: Can the adoptive little sister have the brother she always wanted when he wanted forever? Would a little kink help?

Overall Rating: 2/5

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