GRR Reviews His Miracle Baby by B B Hamel


Elias is the "bad boy" son of mayor who builds custom motorcycles for a living. Alexa is a junior clerk in mayor's office. She was told she can't get pregnant, so she had a one-night stand with Elias. Two months later, she found she had somehow gotten pregnant, even as problems surrounded Elias... The mayor had racked up a huge debt with the mob, and they are out to collect... on anyone related, and that includes Elias, Can Elias keep Alexa and his unborn child safe, and extricate himself from the mess?

The buildup works only partially (why wreck the shop at all? That just cost more money on the long run. And isn't the shop insured?) but the solution didn't work for me. Neither did the ending.

Spoiler:

Turns out, mayor does have enough assets to pay, if he liquidated everything, so the mob boss killed him, Elias signs away everything as the then heir, and leave with Alexa and unborn child to start over somewhere else. This really makes no sense.

Category: Contemporary

Overall Rating: 2/5

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