Bella noticed the brooding but darkly handsome man at her mother's wedding. Seduced by the Greek smile, she chose him to receive her V-card. She is tired of being the good girl. She wants sex, and indeed the sex was... magical. Until he heard her name... // Vitalo knew the bride getting married. Her previous husband was his mentor, and she actually came to him one night, telling him that she would go with him if he would admit he loved her. He refused, even though his body wanted her... Now she's getting remarried... and he's brooding. A one-night stand should be great... until he realized she's a virgin. He made it good for her... very good. It was next morning, when he heard her name, that he realized his mistake... He just f***ed the daughter of the woman he should not want. And things got dire a few months later, when Bella told Vitalo she's pregnant... Vitalo wanted to marry Bella, but he can never tell her he had coveted her mother for a very long time... But when she found out...
Ooohhh, that's a good darkest hour... lots of conflicting emotions about what's the difference between love and infatuation. For a short, this is quite good, even though it does go into a bit of Greek stereotypes. Still, good job.
Category: contemporary
Overall Rating: 4.5/5
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