GRR Reviews In His Custody by Morganna Williams and Jack Crosby

Erotic author Mona Hyatt enjoys chatting with doms and gettings online orders to discipline herself, which inspires her writing. What she didn't know is one of those chatting with her is a serial killer... // Leo Jackson is an experienced agent but lacks field experience, being mostly a "computer geek". He's also a dom that enjoys a bit of D/s spank play on a willing subject. He's chasing down a serial killer who take the eyes of his female victims (after killing them). When Leo found that Mona seems to be the next target, he has no problem taking her into protective custody. And when her computer was examined and how reckless she had been, Leo had no problem disciplining her. But the killer is out there, and he's closer than anyone ever suspected... and always seems to be one step ahead of Leo...

Eh... I have no problem with erotic spanking, and the serial killer is creepy enough, but Leo disciplining a witness he's supposed to be protecting? That's just all kinds of wrong. Also, why does the perp kill the lead agent? What's Mindy's role in all this?  There are a couple plot holes there. 3/5

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