GRR Reviews Maneuver by Chelle Bliss

Delilah barely got out of the car with her baby Lulu when her drunk father sped off... with her purse, phone, and everything else. With nowhere to turn, she entered the bar across the street "just to use the phone" and met Lucio Gallo... Big, gruff, but sweet, protective, and caring. AND he's good with babies. Delilah then learned that she's stranded, as her father had also stolen all her money in her various accounts. But Lucio will save her, get her a job, a place to stay, and treat her like a woman deserves to be treated. It doesn't matter what douchebags she had in her life before this (two men who don't deserve to be fathers). Lucio will be there for her... and his big and boisterous (but loving) family will be hers as well.

Okay, the family is great, and the guy's swoon-worthy. My problem has to do with the opposition, i.e. the two douchebags. "Sperm donor" showed up ONCE near to end but Delilah sent him packing with a few sharp words (if you want us back, are you ready to pay "back child support?"). Her father was practically chased away by the Gallos.  Oh, and the Gallos are nearly "flawless", other than being related to a crime family. *sigh*  Guy's too perfect, and his opposition too lame. 4/5

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