GRR Reviews For One Night by Leaona Luxx

Lola spent years in a loveless marriage with Carter, but she finally got out of it. When out celebrating with her girlfriends in Vegas, she met Lennox, there for business. They had a memorable evening... then she left him (first ever for him). Imagine to their surprise that they met again only a week later, as this time, she's his business consultant, just hired to expedite his transition back into the business he founded (but have to let his brother do a turnaround with). And it'd be TOTALLY inappropriate for them to date...

I have some problems with this novel. Some parts are very good. But some parts are just wordy as ****. There was too much "prequel material" (i.e. how did Lola and Lennox get to be what they are today) that the two characters didn't really meet until almost 1/3rd of the book (not that I really counted). The two characters are swoon-worthy, but the book needs some serious trimming as it has too much fluff. 3/5

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