GRR Reviews Secret Crush by Victoria Pinder

Billionaire John Morgan didn't care about his fortune. What he really wanted was to prove his father killed his sister. That's why he joined the FBI and took down his father's cronies and underlings. But when his father died, John feels lost, and even his FBI superior felt he's no longer of any use. But can he go home again? // Alice still can't believe her friend (John's sister) is gone. When senior Morgan died, Alice felt prudent to attend the funeral, but also to save her parent's organic produce farm (one of the Morgan enterprises was their distributor). Meeting John wasn't on the agenda, nor were the feelings. Then they got one shocker after another... even as someone threatens them both...

There are a few continuity errors as if the story were written in different spurts and merged together without proper editing. The connection between John and Alice was rather thin and chemistry isn't really there. More plot-driven than character-driven. 3/5

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