GRR Reviews The Billionaire Bachelor's Surprise Virgin: by Ella Jade

The Billionaire Bachelor's Surprise Virgin was a pretty trope "Cinderella" romance about a part-time janitor got "discovered" by a fitness center owner. While the romance is sweet, the beginning was cliche as heck, the ending was a total letdown, with way too much tell and not enough show.

To recap, Caden is a personal trainer who used his brother's gym (that he co-owned) as his personal hunting ground for one-night stands, even though he's actually a caring person under the playboy exterior. Devon ran West after a shameful incident and ended up in LA, but having problems making things meet. The two should have never met, but Devon was working as a part-time janitor at the gym and Caden, despite availability of plenty of gorgeous blondes, was immediately drawn to Devon, but she's NOT interested... she's more dedicated to survival... she's homeless, and even Caden backed off when she confessed that she's a virgin. But Caden decided to make her his long-term project... having her move into his condo, no pressure (really). Eventually she melted and gave in, but Caden now really wanted her long-term. Then her secret shame came back to haunt her...

Without spoiling the ending, let's just say, as you'd expect, Caden took care of everything even though Devon, trying to protect Caden, thought she can handle it herself. (And her solution was to run away, at least the first time. ) The whole ending was told by Caden, no action required. It was really lame and let down a decent romance to a fizzled ending

Category: Contemporary

Primary Plot: Part-time janitor with a shameful secret was discovered by fitness tycoon who wanted her long-term and protected her

Tropes: different worlds, virgin, evil relative (brother), woman in peril, protector

Overall Rating:  3/5